Tuesday 8 January 2013

Peer feedback: Oliver Wright

I like your blog overall because you have put a lot of posts onto to which shows that you have taken a lot of time to make it.
          The images on your front cover are good and make it look like a real magazine that you might see in a shop however i thyink there is too much purple at the bottom of the page. I think that in your first draft the amount of purple was better. Along the right hand side of your cover it looks a bit bare so i think you should put some writing or the plug there. Your plug is very good, i like that you have used different colours for the writing on the plug because it makes it look more like a real magazine plug.

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