Teacher Feedback

After Feedback from my teacher I have started to completely redraft my contents page. The process has been slow since I am also trying to meet deadline for my double page spread but I am unsatisfied with the contents page as i think it is quite poor. I feel that it looks too basic and generally unprofessional. After my research and looking at myt peers contents pages I feel that mine could be much better. I agree with all the feedback my teacher has posted.